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  作为即将参加高考的高三学生,学习任务重,压力大,所以你认为有效的学习显得尤为重要。请根据你的切身体会,以“How to Be an Efficient Learner?”为题,从合理安排、劳逸结合等方面谈谈你对有效学习的看法。

  注意:1.短文标题和开头句子已给出,不计入总词数;2.词数:120左右;3.参考词汇:agenda n.日程表;balanced adj.均衡的。

  How to Be an Efficient Learner?

  Being Senior Three students,we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do everyday.

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How to Be an Efficient Learner

  Senior Three students,we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day.Because of limited time,it’s important to be an efficient learner.But how can we become efficient learners?

  Firstly,we should make a realistic agenda,which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.Secondly,divide our spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be balanced students.Thirdly,take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and make sure we are healthy enough to do well in our lessons.Remember:all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.Besides,discussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help.It’s also important to read extra books to ensure you are fed on new ideas from time to time.

  All in all,efficiency is the key to success.

  试题分析:

  本次作文是篇发挥空间较大的开放式作文。试题给了一个主题“How to Be an Efficient Learner”,没有过多的提示,让考生在此基础上自由发挥。这种作文与其它类型的书面表达比较,难度更大,要求也更高。这种作文一定在弄清楚写什么的基础上,明确分几点写、如何写。

  亮点说明:

  范文采取三段式,即“总分总”,层次分明,重点突出。

  在主题段中,作者采用“Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,Besides,All in all”使得观点表达要点清晰明了,行文流畅自如。

  再者,文章水到渠成地使用了从句“Firstly,we should make a realistic agenda,which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover.”及非谓语“Besides,discussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help.”等等,有效地提高了文章的档次。并且,作者恰到好处地使用了谚语“all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”也是文章的又一亮点。

  

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